Un-Betaed Detention Challenge Entry

Well, as always, time has gotten the better of me. I've been very busy lately (what with my one woman feud with the U.S. military and my rather annoying scramblings to save the job I don't even like in the first place) and have managed to finish new chapters in both of my current WIPs (Hidden Emotions chapter 19 should be on-line by Monday or Tuesday night) - but I really wanted to attempt shiv5468's Proper Detention Challenge on WIKTT.

The deadline is today. I've only written the first part of what was supposed to be a one-shot. And my beta hasn't even had a chance to do more than glance at what I have. I'll be posting at Ashwinder and AFF when Beta!Beck has a chance to do her thing.

So - in a last ditch effort to get something posted before the deadline - I give you Part One of

( One Final Detention )

The other half will be coming soon. Let me know what you think.

Un-Betaed Detention Challenge Entry

Well, as always, time has gotten the better of me. I've been very busy lately (what with my one woman feud with the U.S. military and my rather annoying scramblings to save the job I don't even like in the first place) and have managed to finish new chapters in both of my current WIPs (Hidden Emotions chapter 19 should be on-line by Monday or Tuesday night) - but I really wanted to attempt shiv5468's Proper Detention Challenge on WIKTT.

The deadline is today. I've only written the first part of what was supposed to be a one-shot. And my beta hasn't even had a chance to do more than glance at what I have. I'll be posting at Ashwinder and AFF when Beta!Beck has a chance to do her thing.

So - in a last ditch effort to get something posted before the deadline - I give you Part One of

( One Final Detention )

The other half will be coming soon. Let me know what you think.